| I didn't want to wear out my welcome here - and links to the story are in other (science fiction) threads on MCB.
Given the number of views of those threads, I assume some folks have checked things out - but I've heard nothing back. Its really out there for critique and suggestions and commentary - otherwise I'd just be finishing it up and sending it off to a publisher...
Remember: "You can only fit so many mouths around a sphincter before someone’s got to go." |