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|04-29-2008, 11:28 PM||#1 (permalink)|
Join Date: Aug 2007
Paintballers Conquer The Universe
I'm risking the wrath of MCB here; for more detail, see the science fiction anyone thread.
the prologue and first chapter of my story is up on my site at - Paintballers Conquer the Universe
the original thread is now buried, so I've put this reminder here.
The second chapter is now in front of my attorney for review - you'll understand why if it goes up substantially as it was written.
I'd appreciate commentary and critiques - after all, you guys are the intended audience.