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Old 07-02-2009, 09:36 PM   #11 (permalink)
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To be honest I thought it was a mistake when I clicked on it, and I had clicked on a parked domain.
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Old 07-04-2009, 03:34 AM   #12 (permalink)
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Old 07-04-2009, 09:27 AM   #13 (permalink)
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you business name gets lost with everything else since the background and letters are the same color as the rest of page. I suggest a color change if not the background then change the color of both.
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Old 07-04-2009, 09:27 AM   #14 (permalink)
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Very............White......and I don't know what blue cube designs does.

I kind of agree with DRG's comment of a parked domain.

I should kind of get some idea what product/service you are selling/providing when I get to your website without reading everything first.

If I were to guess you are some sort of graphic design firm?

The stock image is fine. She is attractive. However if people see it anywhere else on the interweb and on your site as well it could prove to be a corporate image liability. Also I get the impression that this hottie will answer my call and greet me when I walk into your brick and morter location. How far is this from the truth.

Be sure that your website is an accurate representation of your real business.
Nowadays a good corporate image can make or break a business.

This web site is going to draw people into your business and sell your product/service? Where is the hook? What are your companys qualifications?



Hope something I said will help the design process. I am a production designer by trade and have experience in Graphic design as well as years of art school. My lively hood depends on me coming up with the next "creative idea" for where I work.
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Old 07-04-2009, 11:14 AM   #15 (permalink)
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Very............White......and I don't know what blue cube designs does.

I kind of agree with DRG's comment of a parked domain.

I should kind of get some idea what product/service you are selling/providing when I get to your website without reading everything first.

If I were to guess you are some sort of graphic design firm?

The stock image is fine. She is attractive. However if people see it anywhere else on the interweb and on your site as well it could prove to be a corporate image liability. Also I get the impression that this hottie will answer my call and greet me when I walk into your brick and morter location. How far is this from the truth.

Be sure that your website is an accurate representation of your real business.
Nowadays a good corporate image can make or break a business.

This web site is going to draw people into your business and sell your product/service? Where is the hook? What are your companys qualifications?



Hope something I said will help the design process. I am a production designer by trade and have experience in Graphic design as well as years of art school. My lively hood depends on me coming up with the next "creative idea" for where I work.
dude thats some good advice . im gonna have to look into that .
im learning some design tips from this guy vvvvv
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Old 07-04-2009, 11:24 AM   #16 (permalink)
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He has a nice page.

See how without even moving around the page he gives you 4 or 5 flashes of his prior work? Most importantly all the flashes have a unique look from boring to racy, something for everyone. When I look at that at least one of the designs will appeal to me (as a customer) and then I can start looking at his page for more info.....
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