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Old 04-21-2013, 07:32 PM   #1051 (permalink)
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6/10 I like the composition and subject matter. The foreground is too busy for me.
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8/10 the black and white in contrast to the background is trippy!

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Old 04-21-2013, 10:58 PM   #1052 (permalink)
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6/10. Too much dead space on each side, and a little dark. Nice focus and subject though.

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Old 04-22-2013, 12:07 AM   #1053 (permalink)
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0/10 I am a Nikon guys. Jokes aside 9/10 I would of not shot as wide open. I am curious about what the background is.
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Old 04-22-2013, 01:10 AM   #1054 (permalink)
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I think the picture is to dark, lacks contrast or anything that makes the picture stand out. Try turning this black and white, up the exposure a bit, then bump up the contrast. Also, the guys cigarette hand has slight motion blur, not enough imho to have a positive artistic impact.

I see guys smoking cigarettes and talking on cell phones almost every day. Please don't take this the wrong way but, whats so good about this picture?


I took this when I was in Austin, visiting friends.



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Old 04-22-2013, 01:33 AM   #1055 (permalink)
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I think the picture is to dark, lacks contrast or anything that makes the picture stand out. Try turning this black and white, up the exposure a bit, then bump up the contrast. Also, the guys cigarette hand has slight motion blur, not enough imho to have a positive artistic impact.

I see guys smoking cigarettes and talking on cell phones almost every day. Please don't take this the wrong way but, whats so good about this picture?


I took this when I was in Austin, visiting friends.

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8098/8...e4caa1df_b.jpg

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Too dark
Only one small part is really sharp
background too distracting
Glare too distracting
Its a cat, we see cats everyday..



Nothing special, first ten minutes of having a new camera and this was a test shot..
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Old 04-22-2013, 01:44 AM   #1056 (permalink)
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The cut off around the frame seem to bug me, and while the photo seem creepy it doesn't seem to capture the full effect of "creepiness" that doll tend to have.

Since you don't like cat.....here you go

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10/10 Too creeped out to rate anything else.
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The cut off around the frame seem to bug me, and while the photo seem creepy it doesn't seem to capture the full effect of "creepiness" that doll tend to have.

Since you don't like cat.....here you go

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Go Boston! They deserve a bit of calm after the last hellish week. I know so many people that were there or near by and almost everyone I know was affected somehow. Then again I live about 20 minutes from Boston. As for the actual picture, 8/10. Perspective is a bit off, you need to either see more of their faces or less. The hint at emotions in the corners just leaves you wondering what's on the rest of their faces. I'm a positive person though so I'm hoping for a smile. hehehe

As for my picture, one of my friends is fascinated with eyes. She tends to take a lot of pictures of them. :3

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Old 04-22-2013, 08:25 PM   #1060 (permalink)
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cant rate, not sure what you mean by she takes alot of pictures of them...sounds like this is a picture she took..

6 years ago, first attempt at 35mm with people...
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