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Old 10-12-2011, 04:37 AM   #381 (permalink)
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8/10 good picture, but came out a little grainy... might be the uploader

I wish the DoF on this one was expanded a bit more... but it was a new camera and I didn't have a light meter and was shooting a new(to me) film so I used the program setting and this is what came out...

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Old 10-14-2011, 05:54 PM   #382 (permalink)
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6/10

not really fan of the composition.

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Old 10-15-2011, 06:30 PM   #383 (permalink)
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6/10

not really fan of the composition.

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6163/...cd1e9287_b.jpg
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I would like to see the same shot from a lower perspective, the young birch tree gets cut off from the top breaking the now pictured bliss of quiet fall forest. You do like that ROCK music don't you?

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Old 10-16-2011, 12:36 AM   #384 (permalink)
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I would like to see the same shot from a lower perspective, the young birch tree gets cut off from the top breaking the now pictured bliss of quiet fall forest. You do like that ROCK music don't you?

http://janiandersson.kuvat.fi/kuvat/...pg/_medium.jpg
8/10... nothing that sticks out about it but it's a nice shot...

(hoping this doesn't offend anyonee, being slightly religious... I mean no offense by it)

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Old 10-16-2011, 04:01 PM   #385 (permalink)
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I don't believe in numbers. Art is subjective. Here's what I'd say for this image...

I like: the color palette and the sharpening. I see a lot of people struggling to achieve visual impact with images this small. Nice.

What I'm not crazy about: The composition. I looked at this for a while and tried to understand what YOU wanted ME to see here. There is the cross...and...a black line in the bottom left. Is there an association you want me to draw between these two? Not sure! So I was a little confused by that.

Here's a picture I took at the local junk shop. Was going for a "macabre" theme.

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Old 10-19-2011, 01:43 AM   #386 (permalink)
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this is a really cool shot.
it almost feels like an album cover of a metal band or something... the decay and rust on an angels face.
ill give it an 8/10

i think it would have benefited from some different lighting and maybe some more pp.

something like this maybe? just adjusted the curves, sharpened it a tad and played with some toning. took make 7 minutes:



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hes got like 30k in WHEELS on this machine!
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Old 10-19-2011, 06:43 PM   #387 (permalink)
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I like the Ferrari but the tree growing out the top is distracting. Inspired car shots are hard, it always seems like it has been done before.

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Old 10-20-2011, 04:45 PM   #388 (permalink)
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7/10 I wish I could see more of one of the subjects face. It could just be my monitor but the black shirt kind of blends in. Cute kids though and looks like the families will love this Photo.
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Old 10-20-2011, 05:49 PM   #389 (permalink)
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7/10. Smokers gross me out, to be blunt.
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Old 10-20-2011, 09:22 PM   #390 (permalink)
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I like! I don't give numbers...but here are my thoughts on this shot:

I don't know much about tractors, but I found myself very curious to know what is he doing? Seems to me like the "business end" of that thing it's towing is pointed away from the camera...would there have been another angle that could have shown me better what that tractor is up to?

Also, it looks like you've cropped this a bit. Note that the foreground has two different color bands--with the nearest a bit out of focus. Given there's some open space on the right, I might be curious to see the image with the "near foreground" cropped upward and the right side brought in. That would also increase the relative scale of the subject in the frame. Tractors are BIG, right?

Anyway, keep going. I look forward to seeing more of your pics. Here's one I snapped on a business trip:

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