rate the picture above you V1 - Page 51

bellicose · 02-06-2012, 01:36 PM

Like it, but could be better following the rule of thirds. 7/10

baader · 02-06-2012, 02:19 PM

6/10

Needs more contrast, more colour. Post processing can fix those.
Also the edge of box on top left is distracting.

Can´t remember if this was here already. Oh well, I like it anyways.
Shot with Canonet on a APX400 film.

mtaylor · 02-09-2012, 09:32 PM

8/10, I'd like if the land across the water weren't so washed out. (I know it's film)

Deus Machina · 02-10-2012, 02:37 AM

8/10. Think a lower angle would show the sense of scale better.

I'm an amateur, take that for what it's worth.

Random dinking with options.

baader · 02-10-2012, 03:12 AM

6/10

like everyhing that has motocycles in it, but that lacks a clear subject.

Rymzor · 02-16-2012, 11:26 PM

8/10, I like it!, is the lady the focus of the photograph?

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Kermit · 02-17-2012, 03:04 PM

Pretty cool photo, Rymzor! I like the DOF.

Trying something new with B&W. I was going for a darker photo to really try and highlight the subject. Greenhouses are cool, very even lighting.

criticalhammer · 02-18-2012, 12:14 PM

Bigballa, maybe its my monitor but I have a hard time making out whats in the picture. I have to focus in and trace the contour of the shapes to notice what they are. Also the plastic ziptie/ring is what pops out the most. I'm guessing you where trying to capture the fruit and the stalk?

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worrptangl · 02-18-2012, 08:04 PM

I really like the picture. The way it draws you in, and I like lighting.

8/10

EDIT: I didn't know if I was allowed to put a desciption.

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Originally Posted by sniper42

7/10 I don't like how you cropped parts of the bug and there is a bit too much dead space on the right.

I agree, but I didn't crop anything. I was leading the beetle waiting for it to come into the center of the frame and right where you see it. The beetle decided to take off so I moved back over it and that was the only in focus shot the rest were a blur.

I liked the shot because it showed what was underneath its shell. It wasn't the best of what I took but it was the most interesting.

sniper42 · 02-19-2012, 02:03 AM

7/10 I don't like how you cropped parts of the bug and there is a bit too much dead space on the right.

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