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Old 02-06-2012, 02:36 PM   #501 (permalink)
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Like it, but could be better following the rule of thirds. 7/10

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Old 02-06-2012, 03:19 PM   #502 (permalink)
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6/10

Needs more contrast, more colour. Post processing can fix those.
Also the edge of box on top left is distracting.

Canīt remember if this was here already. Oh well, I like it anyways.
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Old 02-09-2012, 10:32 PM   #503 (permalink)
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8/10, I'd like if the land across the water weren't so washed out. (I know it's film)

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Old 02-10-2012, 03:37 AM   #504 (permalink)
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8/10. Think a lower angle would show the sense of scale better.

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Old 02-10-2012, 04:12 AM   #505 (permalink)
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6/10

like everyhing that has motocycles in it, but that lacks a clear subject.

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Old 02-17-2012, 12:26 AM   #506 (permalink)
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8/10, I like it!, is the lady the focus of the photograph?

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Old 02-17-2012, 04:04 PM   #507 (permalink)
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Pretty cool photo, Rymzor! I like the DOF.

Trying something new with B&W. I was going for a darker photo to really try and highlight the subject. Greenhouses are cool, very even lighting.
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Old 02-18-2012, 01:14 PM   #508 (permalink)
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Bigballa, maybe its my monitor but I have a hard time making out whats in the picture. I have to focus in and trace the contour of the shapes to notice what they are. Also the plastic ziptie/ring is what pops out the most. I'm guessing you where trying to capture the fruit and the stalk?

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Old 02-18-2012, 09:04 PM   #509 (permalink)
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I really like the picture. The way it draws you in, and I like lighting.

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7/10 I don't like how you cropped parts of the bug and there is a bit too much dead space on the right.
I agree, but I didn't crop anything. I was leading the beetle waiting for it to come into the center of the frame and right where you see it. The beetle decided to take off so I moved back over it and that was the only in focus shot the rest were a blur.

I liked the shot because it showed what was underneath its shell. It wasn't the best of what I took but it was the most interesting.
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Old 02-19-2012, 03:03 AM   #510 (permalink)
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7/10 I don't like how you cropped parts of the bug and there is a bit too much dead space on the right.

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