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Old 07-23-2012, 10:39 PM   #741 (permalink)
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8.5/10. I like the action...nice gooey look to the paint. I also like your choice of placement for the watermark, which I've been on a rant about lately...people putting signatures on images in a way that detracts from the composition. Not here...that could be text on the bunker.

In terms of constructive feedback, there's a lot of space in the image at top left...could you have moved to fill the frame more fully with this subject? Also, in terms of exposure, I might have let the background go more in order to get more detail in his chest. Or used a bigger flash...or a slave on the ground...

Here's one from this week for me... It was so humid, when I went outside to take some shots of this lovely plant, my lens fogged up. I sat there frustrated for a few seconds then realized this adversity was a chance to make an image different than I had planned. I visualized the softness and the color wash...

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Old 07-24-2012, 12:34 PM   #742 (permalink)
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@Dr. Phunky Pants I really like that! Great vintage feel to it because of the lens fog! 10/10
Putting this up just because I wanted to give you a 10
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Old 07-25-2012, 09:26 AM   #743 (permalink)
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I'd suggest removing the borders. Looks a lot cleaner. I like the shot though, nice light rays. Work on keeping the horizon level. 6/10

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Old 07-25-2012, 09:32 AM   #744 (permalink)
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I love both the composition, and use of negative space!

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Old 07-25-2012, 11:52 AM   #745 (permalink)
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I'd suggest removing the borders. Looks a lot cleaner. I like the shot though, nice light rays. Work on keeping the horizon level. 6/10

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The horizon is level used the in camera calibrated level. You mean I should cut the trees down?
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Old 07-25-2012, 12:04 PM   #746 (permalink)
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The horizon is level used the in camera calibrated level. You mean I should cut the trees down?
Not necessarily, the buildings just look a tad off/crooked

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Old 07-25-2012, 12:07 PM   #747 (permalink)
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I love both the composition, and use of negative space!

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Awesome lighting. What is it? A tunnel of some kind I think.

I do like the shot though. 9/10.
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Old 07-25-2012, 12:14 PM   #748 (permalink)
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Not necessarily, the buildings just look a tad off/crooked

So I should jack up the run down buildings?
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Old 07-25-2012, 01:31 PM   #749 (permalink)
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dgorman47 ^^^^^ -20/10 for mulitple posts without picture.

Kermit: 9/10 I love the expression in this picture. good catch. -1 for the post without picture

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Old 07-25-2012, 02:28 PM   #750 (permalink)
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Aaron, I like the shot. However I feel it could be a little sharper perhaps and I'd like to see it in color. Other than that, pretty cool shot with a nice use of the rule of thirds. 7/10.


Took this shot earlier today. Saw this little guy(I named him Anthony) and took his photo. He was such a nice little bug.
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