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Old 06-03-2012, 05:05 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Thoughts on this photo?



My first try at using a bright white background for a portrait. Thoughts?
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Old 06-03-2012, 06:13 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Self portrait? Nice but with her eyes she needs to be in color
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Old 06-04-2012, 02:34 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I think it need to be straight, it falls badly to the left.
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Old 06-04-2012, 03:56 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I think it need to be straight, it falls badly to the left.
Agree, along with I'm finding the bright white background almost a little overpowering. I think a little bit tighter composition towards the face or a little PS magic is required on the background would fix it up nicely

I like your watermark BTW.
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Old 06-10-2012, 02:53 PM   #5 (permalink)
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It looks like you're trying to go for a high key photo. I feel there's too much dark in here for that (the shirt, the focus on the dark eyes). A lot of high key work, the skin on a person is almost white as well.. with just barely a definition of curvature in the face. Change your exposure up, and change your composition.. this one is nothing to post about.
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