mcarterbrown.com  

Plugged in Online Gaming, and Technology

Reply
 
Thread Tools
Old 12-07-2012, 05:11 PM   #1 (permalink)
Straight 6 DID Bust!
 
Kermit's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2010
Location: Pace, FL

Photography Posters/Flyers



Made these earlier today. Thoughts?
Kermit is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 12-07-2012, 05:19 PM   #2 (permalink)
MCB Member
 
Broch's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Ottawa, IL

CCM Fan
AKA Fan
Kilt Fan
Nice work, Josh!
__________________
I finally decided to start a thread for my Feedback: http://www.mcarterbrown.com/forums/f...-feedback.html

Rocking it for the Fringe Division!

https://www.facebook.com/pages/Fring...616810?fref=ts
Broch is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 12-07-2012, 05:30 PM   #3 (permalink)
Post Whore
 
Arson24's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: Vancouver, B.C

looks great man!
Arson24 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 12-07-2012, 05:34 PM   #4 (permalink)
The Man With No Plan
 
super_stanchy's Avatar
 
Join Date: Nov 2008
Location: Oregon City, OR

CCM Fan
PBN Fan
HOW DO I CALL?!?!!?

:P

you forgot your # on it!


im diggin the pics, the spyder is very cool
super_stanchy is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 12-07-2012, 05:43 PM   #5 (permalink)
Straight 6 DID Bust!
 
Kermit's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2010
Location: Pace, FL

I like how you spelled "spyder"

And crap. I'll fix that
Kermit is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 12-07-2012, 05:46 PM   #6 (permalink)
The Man With No Plan
 
super_stanchy's Avatar
 
Join Date: Nov 2008
Location: Oregon City, OR

CCM Fan
PBN Fan
Quote:
Originally Posted by Kermit View Post
I like how you spelled "spyder"

And crap. I'll fix that
i've always spelled it like that....
the only time i dont, is on MSWord... (spell check)
super_stanchy is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 12-07-2012, 05:59 PM   #7 (permalink)
Old School
 
Join Date: Dec 2011
Location: Florida

CCM Fan
I can't read the scribble at the top. Other than that you're doing very well
Lead-Foot is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 12-07-2012, 06:21 PM   #8 (permalink)
Post Whore
 
Join Date: Feb 2011
Location: PEI, Canada

1. Model Release for all those people? Also Red Bull may have an issue with their logo appearing in something advertising someone that isn't them. Issues that 99.999% of the time really don't matter, but something to consider if you like to cover your ***.

2. Lose the @gmail.com address if possible. Switch it to something using your domain name, and just pipe it back to your gmail. Few things scream "Fly by Night" more than free email hosting, and while it isn't an issue to many it will shake the confidence of some. Why risk losing potential clients when you already control a domain name?

3. Lose the spider. Cool image, but fear of spiders is one of the most common aggressive phobias. Do you have a nice one of a grasshopper or something? Crickets and lady bugs work well. Ants aren't bad. Basically something that isn't instantly seen as a "Creepy-Crawly-Oh-my-god-its-in-my-hair!" type creature has a far lower risk of turning people away.

Actually, you may want to try swapping the photos used around for ones more related to those in your list. Don't have to change them all, but make it clear as your eye goes down the page it can match up directly with what the texts says.

Decent layout, and yeah, forgetting your phone number? Rarely a good sign... (And this is why you get someone to proof read for you, unlike a former boss that ordered $5000 in printing services with his home phone number listed, not the office's...) Doesn't look like you'll need to go through many versions before nailing it.
__________________
Quote:
Originally Posted by Lrrpie-CT View Post
I destroy drives for clients all the time. Sometimes, intentionally.
Luckless is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply

  mcarterbrown.com » General » Off-Topic » Plugged in

Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On

Forum Jump


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 06:16 AM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.6
Copyright ©2000 - 2014, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Search Engine Optimization by vBSEO
© MCB Network LLC