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|12-07-2012, 05:19 PM||#2 (permalink)|
Nice work, Josh!
I finally decided to start a thread for my Feedback: http://www.mcarterbrown.com/forums/f...-feedback.html
Rocking it for the Fringe Division!
|12-07-2012, 05:34 PM||#4 (permalink)|
The Man With No Plan
HOW DO I CALL?!?!!?
you forgot your # on it!
im diggin the pics, the spyder is very cool
|12-07-2012, 05:46 PM||#6 (permalink)|
The Man With No Plan
the only time i dont, is on MSWord... (spell check)
|12-07-2012, 06:21 PM||#8 (permalink)|
Join Date: Feb 2011
Location: PEI, Canada
1. Model Release for all those people? Also Red Bull may have an issue with their logo appearing in something advertising someone that isn't them. Issues that 99.999% of the time really don't matter, but something to consider if you like to cover your ***.
2. Lose the @gmail.com address if possible. Switch it to something using your domain name, and just pipe it back to your gmail. Few things scream "Fly by Night" more than free email hosting, and while it isn't an issue to many it will shake the confidence of some. Why risk losing potential clients when you already control a domain name?
3. Lose the spider. Cool image, but fear of spiders is one of the most common aggressive phobias. Do you have a nice one of a grasshopper or something? Crickets and lady bugs work well. Ants aren't bad. Basically something that isn't instantly seen as a "Creepy-Crawly-Oh-my-god-its-in-my-hair!" type creature has a far lower risk of turning people away.
Actually, you may want to try swapping the photos used around for ones more related to those in your list. Don't have to change them all, but make it clear as your eye goes down the page it can match up directly with what the texts says.
Decent layout, and yeah, forgetting your phone number? Rarely a good sign... (And this is why you get someone to proof read for you, unlike a former boss that ordered $5000 in printing services with his home phone number listed, not the office's...) Doesn't look like you'll need to go through many versions before nailing it.